Take the first five minutes of class to analyze this cause-effect paragraph. Identify the cause(s), the effect(s), and whatever language the writer used to signal a new cause/effect was being brought up. Send your response via blog comment (if you've been having trouble commenting on the blog, sign in to your gmail account and then "follow" the blog. that should take care of the problem.
In recent decades, cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas. There are several reasons for this occurrence. First, the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs, which tended to be located in cities. These jobs, with their promise of a better material life, attracted many people from rural areas. Second, there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers. The promise of a better education persuaded many families to leave farming communities and move to the cities. Finally, as the cities grew, people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums. For many people, these facilities made city life appear more interesting than life on the farm, and therefore drew them away from rural communities.
Your task for today: Please write a cause-effect paragraph of at least 8-10 sentences. You have three model paragraphs that you can use as examples. Email to me by the end of the period. In the body of that email, please complete the following sentence: On a scale of 1-10, with 10 being mastery, my understanding of the cause-effect structure is a _________ because ______________________.
the cause is the rise of industrialization, schools established to educate children of the new factory laborers and the establishment of entertainment and culture
ReplyDeletethe effects is that 50% of the population live in urban areas.
"there are several reasons", "effects",
Effect: cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas.
ReplyDeleteCause: the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs, which tended to be located in cities.
there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers. The promise of a better education persuaded many families to leave farming communities and move to the cities
Effect
ReplyDeletecities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas
Causes
increasing industrialization ,jobs, with their promise of a better material life, attracted many people from rural areas.education persuaded many families to leave farming communities and move to the cities
places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums
Cause - the population has grown so much that now up to 50 percent of people are living in an urban area.
ReplyDeleteEffect-
increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs, which tended to be located in cities
there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers
Sinal - there are several reasons for this ; first ; second
Cause(s)the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century, many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers, as the cities grew, people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums.
ReplyDeleteEffect(s)cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas
claim - cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas.
ReplyDeleteevidence - the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs , there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers,as the cities grew, people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums
Causes- increasing industrialization,schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers,people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums.
ReplyDeleteEffects-cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas
A cause on this paragraph is that In recent decades, cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas.
ReplyDeleteAnd the effect is about being several reasons to this cause.
The effect is that cities have grown so large that about half of the Earth's population live in urban areas. The causes of this are the increase of industrialization,too many schools established for new factory laborers, and establishment of places of leisure,entertainment,and culture. The language used by the writer that pointed it out was where it said " There are several reasons for this occurrence."
ReplyDeleteCause: Cities have grown bigger and more people 50% live in urban areas.
ReplyDeleteeffects: Increasing in industrialization in 19th century, which created more jobs which were located in cities.
Cause: the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs, better education, culture.
ReplyDeleteEffect:
Cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas.
claim - cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas.
ReplyDeleteEvidence: the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs , there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers,as the cities grew, people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums.
cause: cities have grown so larger that no about 50% of the earths population live in urban areas.
ReplyDeleteeffect: the increasing industrialization of the 19th century resulted in the creation of many facotry jobs. There were many schools established to educate children of the new facotry laborers, as the cities gre people established places of leisure, entertainmentm and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums.
The author of shows us that a new effect was being brought up because it uses the words such as, first, second and finally". this just groups out the different effects.
Causes: increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century, there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers,leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums.
ReplyDeleteEffects: 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas.
1 cause, many effects
ReplyDeleteCause: In recent decades cities have grown so large that now 50% of the Earth’s population live in urban areas.
Language usage: There are several reasons for this occurrence
First,
Second,
Finally,
Effects: These jobs, with their promise of a better material life, attracted many people from rural areas.
The promise of a better education persuaded many families to leave farming communities and move to the cities.
For many people, these facilities made city life appear more interesting than life on the farm, and therefore drew them away from rural communities.
effect:about 50% of earth population live in urban areas.
ReplyDeletecause: increasing industrialization of the 19th century. schools established to educate children of the factory laborers, and leisure( places of entertainment, cultural arts, etc).
cause: cities have grown so larger that no about 50% of the earths population live in urban areas.
ReplyDeleteEffect: increasing idustrialization of the 19th century,there were many schools,many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers,people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums.
The author showed the use of cause/effect by using the actual word "cause" in the claim, and also using words like First, second and finally.
Cause:
ReplyDelete"cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas."
Effects:
"the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs, which tended to be located in cities.","there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers.","people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums."
Transition Words:
"First,","Second,"Finally,"
Written by: Gigi B.
CAUSES-
ReplyDelete- cities have grown so large that now about 50% of the Earth's population lives in urban areas.
- the increasing industrialization of the nineteenth century resulted in the creation of many factory jobs
- there were many schools established to educate the children of the new factory laborers.
- as the cities grew, people established places of leisure, entertainment, and culture, such as sports stadiums, theaters, and museums.
EFFECTS-
- with their promise of a better material life, attracted many people from rural areas.
- The promise of a better education persuaded many families to leave farming communities and move to the cities.
- these facilities made city life appear more interesting than life on the farm, and therefore drew them away from rural communities.
- Johanna Hasing